Night Mistress

Hi, Eric.

Welcome to YWS!

The week passed by fast. Peter was getting used to the armies and the laws. Susan was setting up the staff of the castle. Lucy was tending to the wounded ...

I know this is a childish, but i suggest: Salior Moon and my more mature suggest: Jueville orion.

It's good. but it's a little short. try add some more to it. and i think you are in the the wrong section.

Welcome to YWS!

That movie was awesome!

I live in South Carolina too. anyways, welcome to YWS! Mel, I hope you enjoyed it here. NM

I think it's pretty good. even though you don't like it. i think you should continue it.

welcome to YWS, Mark! I hope you enjoyed it here. NM

it's interesting. Maybe you sould write a sequel to let the readers know if she ggoing to me alone or she is going to find another person.

it's....interesting.

Elvina walked back to the room that Susan and Lucy had changed in. She knocked on the door. “Are you ready, your majesties?” she asked through the door. The door ...

Good. I hope you put up another piece soon.

Me too.